<My favorite relative>
My favorite relative is my aunt, my dad's little sister. When I was 5 years old, she lived in the same house with our family. I can't remember everything since I was very young back then, but when I watched the video of my childhood I can see my aunt around me all the time. I used to learn singing and dancing from her. I still remember a song called "Dal-bong-yi". It's a song about a boy who is stupid. After she got married she moved to Seoul. She used to visit Daejeon, the city I'm from, every month or two. The reason I like her most is that she always teaches me something. She taught me singing and dancing when I was young. When I got bigger, she always told me about her life's story and taught me many lessons, such as "preparing for your future will always bring you opportunities", or "Early birds eat worms". She not only gave me serious advices, but also funny, but sincere advices, such as "date as many boys as you can". These stories and lessons of hers were always interesting, and gave me many lessons. Now, I moved to Seoul which she lives in. We sometimes meet and chat for few hours. I like talking to her about my concerns because she always has a good answer that I want. I'm going to meet her tomorrow and I'm excited.
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