Thursday, May 31, 2012

Narrative paragraph / Cho yoon jung

Narrative paragraph about something that happened to you while you were on a trip 

 

Coincident Connection

 

     Last summer, July, I was traveling all around the Thailand with my friends. Every place and every moment were exciting memory until now, but there was most special thing happened to me while I was traveling. On the fifth day of the traveling, we moved our places from Bangkok to Chiang Mai. We were going to stay at a guest house where a Korean couple runs. So many Korean travelers who visit Chiang Mai stayed at that guest house and the traveler who stays the next door was also Korean. Next day, we went to a mountain to do the tracking. At the beginning of the tracking, we join with other travelers, and among 5 of other travelers there was one Korean man. Meeting the same country person in other country was a somewhat nice and enjoyable thing. We had many talks with him and soon we find out that he was the man who stays next to our room. It was a really surprising coincidence! During the hicking we got closer and after coming back to the guest house we had a dinner together and even change our e-mails. Then, on the last day in Chiang Mai, we said good-bye to him and asked about his next traveling plan. And he said the same place we were going to visit ; Phuket. It was another coincidence and we said like "Maybe we could see each other in the Phuket also!" and laughed because probably no one in there thought we could meet again in Phuket, because Phuket was even broader than the Chiang Mai. However, amazing thing happened! Later, on the last day of our staying at Phuket, while waiting for the bus, we met him again. I can still remember the moment we saw each other and laughed with glad. It was a very short encounter but after that meeting, we all thought we were in a somekind of special connection, and we still have connected with each other when coming back to Korea.

 

3 comments:

  1. Hello, I'm Yun You Jung. I'm also surprised at your coincidence while reading your writing!
    The second sentence seems to be the topic sentence, and I can expect that special thing will be happened. You gave enough background information in the beginning of the paragraph. I like your writing because you don't use long or complicated sentences. This make your writing neat. Thank you for your writing, and see you in the class!

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  2. I misused the word 'connected' I tried to mean 'contacted'

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