My favorite piece of song is called 'Love Shine' by a Korean singer called 'black skirt'. The song is briefly about a boy's mind who's at a loss because he has to leave to a foreign country tomorrow. He is worried about her girlfriend and he doesn't want to leave. The lyric I love the most in the song is "Sing a song into my ears so I can't listen to other birds singing." I could guess that the boy is trying to relax his girlfriend who is worried about other girls in the new world. The reason I like this song is because it is related to my experience. I have many experiences that I had to let people I like go to foreign countries. Since I had many chances to study abroad when I was young, I had to say good bye with my friends several times. Even though I came back to Korea later, we got a little bit awkward because the time has passed a lot. Also, I had been broke up with my boyfriend because of studying abroad. The sadness of separating without any mutual problem was harder than I thought. 'Out of sight, out of mind' is a saying I hate the most. Whether I hate it or not, it always happened that way. After going through these sad farewells, I listened to this song and I felt sad as if it were my story. This is a simple but strong reason why I like this song.
Hi Minju! This is Wansoo. Actually I didn't know the song, so I found and listened it right after. Wow It's really somewhat dreamlike and attractive. Anyway, not olny just introducing the song, relating it with your personal feelings and experiece is a great job i think. Actually, I couldn't find something to change. It just good as it is.
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Hi Minju!This is MinKyong.
ReplyDeleteI liked your writing overall. It was a really nice try that you related this song to your life. By reading your story I could follow the story the song tells. But since this was a descriptive writing assignment, I wish there were some more describings on the song, like how slow the melody is or how it makes you feel. I think this would improve your writing better.Anyway this was a very piece of writing.Thank you!
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My favorite piece of song is called 'Love Shine' by a Korean singer called 'black skirt'. The song is briefly about a boy's mind who's at a loss because he has to leave to a foreign country tomorrow. He is worried about her girlfriend and he doesn't want to leave. The lyric I love the most in the song is "Sing a song into my ears so I can't listen to other birds singing." I could guess that the boy is trying to relax his girlfriend who is worried about other girls in the new world. The reason I like this song is because it is related to my experience. I have many experiences that I had to let people I like go to foreign countries. Since I had many chances to study abroad when I was young, I had to say good bye with my friends several times. Even though I came back to Korea later, we got a little bit awkward because the time has passed a lot. Also, I had been broke up with my boyfriend because of studying abroad. The sadness of separating without any mutual problem was harder than I thought. 'Out of sight, out of mind' is a saying I hate the most. Whether I hate it or not, it always happened that way. After going through these sad farewells, I listened to this song and I felt sad as if it were my story. This is a simple but strong reason why I like this song.
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