Adventurous person like Tom Sawyer.
Have you ever read "The Adventures of Tom Sawyer"? As you can see in the title, this novel is about adventures of children. And like the boys in this book, I'm also adventurous people. Truth be told, I was afraid of changes when I was young. But as I grew, I recognized that there are lots of interesting in the world, that I can improve myself thorough challenging diverse things. Although I feel nervous when trying new things, I enjoy challenging! For example, I usually take a different route from before. In the novel which I said earlier, Tom Sawyer and his friend Huckleberry Finn get around village to find treasure. And finally they find it in the cave. Like these boys, when I go to particular place, I take a route which is different from what I took before, and start get around. There are many times when I get lost and wandered around, but when I find my way, I feel as if I found treasure. Also, I try to experience diverse fields. I heard lectures from diverse fields like marketing, language, self-improvement, and IT. Add to this, I tried to read books or watching videos about various topics like novel, self-improvement, society, history, science, economics, etc. Finally, there are still so many things I want to challenge. I promised to go paragliding after watching people who are doing it on the TV. I try to challenge to give a presentation to people like Steve Jobs. I'll be fluent not only in English but also in Spanish. I have challenged until now, but I want to continue challenge more interesting things from now on.
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ReplyDeletei can know you by your paragraph. you explain yourself by many examples, so it is easy to imagine who you are. it is very interesting that you are a adventrous person. i always envy those people. i think it is good to give many examples. also your introduction by interesting story Tom sowyer is attractive. however, i think it will be better if you lessen sentence about Tom. of course it helps your writing smoothly and easy to read, but your own story is more necessary i think. also your examples about what you study, what you read and what you have interesting about have to be more specific. more specific details can express you better. thank you !!
Adventurous person like Tom Sawyer.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever read "The Adventures of Tom Sawyer"? As you can see in the title, this novel is about adventures of children. And like the boys in this book, I'm also adventurous people. Truth be told, I was afraid of changes when I was young. But as I grew, I recognized that there are lots of interesting things in the world, that I can improve myself thorough challenging diverse things. Although I still feel nervous when trying new things, I enjoy challenging! For example, I usually take a different route from before. In the novel which I said earlier, Tom Sawyer and his friend Huckleberry Finn get around village to find treasure. And finally they find it in the cave. Like these boys, when I go to particular place, I take a route which is different from what I took before, and start get around. There are many times when I get lost and wandered around, but when I find my way, I feel as if I found treasure. Also, I try to experience diverse fields. I heard lectures from diverse fields like marketing, language, self-improvement, and IT. Add to this, I tried to read books or watching videos about various topics like novel, self-improvement, society, history, science, economics, etc. Finally, there are still so many things I want to challenge. I promised to go paragliding after watching people who are doing it on the TV. I try to challenge to give a presentation to people like Steve Jobs. I'll be fluent not only in English but also in Spanish. I have challenged until now, but I want to continue challenge many things that I haven't done before from now on.