A daily life of somebody called burning-person.
It's still 5:30 A.M. Pressing snooze and murmuring 'only five minutes…' and then 'oh, God…' she wakes up. For this semester, she takes 9 classes. And if it adds the extra class starts at 7:50 A.M, she is taking total 10 classes. Four times a week, she has the first class at the top of her daily schedule. The reason why she makes such a crazy timetable was to set her as an early bird. And she thinks it is successful. Of course there is also breaking time, and she uses it to do her assignment. Three times a week, she goes to the gym and exercise for one and a half hour. She says it helps her to keep her stamina higher, and her weight lower. Ten hours a week, she teaches the students and affords her own expenses. Three times a week, at most, she goes out with her boy friend. What they do when they date is more interesting, they go to the famous restaurant, of course around the college, eat enthusiastically and leave as soon as possible. Then they head to the library and study together. In everyway, she tries to save her time, believing time is more precious than money. She lives far from the college where takes for an hour. She makes the most of this time. She can watch a piece of American soap drama, listen to Obama's speech that is her favorite, or sleep fitfully. To her, twenty-four-hour is too short. She makes joke, "I want to expand to 30hours a day!" and her remark reflects she is definitely hard working. It's 11:00. She arrives at home. After she finishes her hectic day, she got tired to death and fells asleep like the sleeping beauty. Like will never wake up…
To Narae from Sora
ReplyDeleteWhat I like this about this piece of writing is that you use effective example. I easily understand why you are burning person. But I think if you write in order about a day that would be better. For example, 5:30 am. wake up, until 9 a.m. to 3 p.m. take classes. Well something like this.
Your main point seems to be 'I'm a burning person.' Like I said before, you use effective example.
Pressing snooze and murmuring... I like this sentence. Because I do it every morning. :) And the last sentence was good too. You sleep like sleeping beauty, it was beutiful expression.
And if it adds the extra class starts at 7:50 A.M, I couldn't understand this sentence clearly. I just want to ask you why? what does it mean?
A daily life of somebody called burning-person.
ReplyDeleteIt's still 5:30 A.M. Pressing snooze and murmuring 'only five minutes…' and then 'oh, God…' she wakes up. For this semester, she takes 9 classes. And if adds the extra english speaking class starts at 7:50 A.M, she is taking total 10 classes. Four times a week, she has the first class at the top of her daily schedule. The reason why she makes such a crazy timetable was to set her as an early bird. And she thinks it is successful. Of course there is also breaking time, and she uses it to do her assignment. Three times a week, she goes to the gym and exercise for one and a half hour. She says it helps her to keep her stamina higher, and her weight lower. Ten hours a week, she teaches the students and affords her own expenses. Three times a week, at most, she goes out with her boy friend. What they do when they date is more interesting, they go to the famous restaurant, of course around the college, eat enthusiastically and leave as soon as possible. Then they head to the library and study together. In everyway, she tries to save her time, believing time is more precious than money. She lives far from the college where takes for an hour. She makes the most of this time. She can watch a piece of American soap drama, listen to Obama's speech that is her favorite, or sleep fitfully. To her, twenty-four-hour is too short. She makes joke, "I want to expand to 30hours a day!" and her remark reflects she is definitely hard working. It's 11:00. She arrives at home. After she finishes her hectic day, she got tired to death and fells asleep like the sleeping beauty. Like will never wake up…