BEING A KID AGAIN WHENEVER I GET SICK
I feel shy to say that I still go to pediatric hospital when I get sick. The pediatric clinic is located in Gang-Nam. In the middle of compact mass with the number of buildings, the hospital's old, worn-out, and yellowish brown building is remarkable. Once stepped on shabby, faded-colored, and low stairs, instead of shining marble floor and stairs in modern building, the door of this hospital comes into sight. The door creaks saying it is not young whenever people go into the place. As soon as I walked into the hospital, a typical hospital-smell reminds me that I am in the clinic. And I can hear soft piano music that is supposed to comfort petrified children. On the ceiling, various shaped mobils such as bell-shaped, star-shaped hang to there. Lots of Teddy bears are sitting here and there. On the left side of the waiting room, there is a wooden shelve. On the first story of the shelves, there are a few of appoint letters and certifications for the doctor. Under the shelves, many comic books and picture books are prepared. If I go inside of doctor's room, I can see so many dolls and toys everywhere. This familiar atmosphere helps my heart to be relieved and to recover soon.
Hi, i am Kim you jin. thanks for your sharing. your paragraph reminds me atmosphere of clinic i also experienced when i was young. you desciribe well so i can imagine how it looks and how you feel in that hospital. it seems to be cute air, that is, it may be decorated by cute dolls, toys etc. you also describe one by one by watching. i can easily imagine. thank you! hahaha : )
ReplyDeletehowever why don't you add some concluding sentence? of course, your sentence represents your feeling by reminding it well, but i think it will be better if you add a CONCLUSIVE sentence. thank you. see you!^^
I feel shy to say that I still go to pediatric hospital when I get sick. The pediatric clinic is located in Gang-Nam. In the middle of compact mass with the number of buildings, the hospital's old, worn-out, and yellowish brown building is remarkable. Once stepped on shabby, faded-colored, and low stairs, instead of shining marble floor and stairs in modern building, the door of this hospital comes into sight. The door creaks saying it is not young whenever people go into the place. As soon as I walked into the hospital, a typical hospital-smell reminds me that I am in the clinic. And I can hear soft piano music that is supposed to comfort petrified children. On the ceiling, various shaped mobils such as bell-shaped, star-shaped hang to there. Lots of Teddy bears are sitting here and there. On the left side of the waiting room, there is a wooden shelve. On the first story of the shelves, there are a few of appoint letters and certifications for the doctor. Under the shelves, many comic books and picture books are prepared. If I go inside of doctor's room, I can see so many dolls and toys everywhere. This familiar atmosphere helps my heart to be relieved and to recover soon. so, I will not forget the hospital's special ambience even if I get much older.
ReplyDeleteand i want to change the title too,
ReplyDeleteThe reason why 25-year-old woman still goes to the pediatric hospital.